A Poem for my little daughter-An eternal instant of joy-

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By Mystique1957

I have dedicated this poem to my sweet daughter: Sué (pronounced SOOEH) Daniella. She is seven years old and doesn`t live with me since she was one year old. I woke up this morning with the poem echoing in my head.

The funniest thing was that I dreamed about it in English. She and I have a beautiful relationship, her mom, her stepdad and I are very good friends, and we see each other every other weekend though we speak on the phone more often.

I have shared with her many places, movies, computer games, attraction parks, meals, malls; but we have never shared a day at the beach and that was the dream about and that inspired this poem. Thank you for reading it friends. It means a lot to me.

Warmest hugs, lots of love and infinite heavenly blessings,

I LOVE YOU ALL

Al

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How is your relationship like with your little daughter(if you have one)?

  • Excellent! I can't live without her
  • It`s good!
  • It's alright, but I need to work on it.
  • Can't say much! We do not see each oter often
  • I am quite impacient! I admit it!
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An eternal instant of joy-



I glowed like the sun as your small steps imprinted

their barefooted traces in the wet sand

Your racing was like the wind; free, caressing,

refreshing and uncaring of the surroundings

Time seemed to pause while I waited

with my arms as a cross less christ;

pain free, proud and happy

Foamy waves embraced your slender,

cinnamon thighs as your smile became

focused and your brown sugar,

almond eyes flickered at me mischievously

My heart pumped like a young and wild

bronco enjoying its first unrestricted race,

endless, addictive, and reassuring


Two splashy leaps and your warm arms

were hanging from my neck, almost bringing me down.

A flash touch of lips and then your legs

were tightening around my waist followed

by the sweetest words ever heard: “I love you, daddy”

P.S

I love you too, baby!


Copyright ©Mystique®2010

Copyright ©Alberto J. Alvarez G. ® 2010

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Pamela99 profile image

Pamela99 Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

What a precious poem. Your daughter is beautiful. These is nothing quite like a father daughter relationship. Wonderful hub.

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you ever so much, Pam!

I appreciate it a whole lot!

warm regards and blessings,

Al

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moreshanti96 2 years ago

Just beautiful. Adorable rendering of a parent's love.

I love it. Aren't we lucky to love like this?? *sight*

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prasetio30 Level 8 Commenter 2 years ago

There is no instant in this life my friend. And something instant is not good for us. But this is different my friend. I hope she growth become good kid and always obey the parents. Send my warm greeting to your sweet daughter. Gracias

Prasetio

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Yes,I am, my sweet moreshanti! She is a sweet girl and daddy loves her a whole lot!

Thank you for dropping by and leave your love in this place!

Kisses,hugs and blessings,

Al

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

My man Prasetio...

How nice of you to come by! I truly appreciate that, my brother! You are right...It`s not instant. I thank God for letting me have such a sweet and obedient girl, for she is very obedient, sweet and respectful!

warm regards and blessings to you and your children as well, my Friend!,

Al

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Rebecca E. 2 years ago

as always excellent writing. Stumbled Upon and rated up my friend.

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

My dearest Becca...

Thank you so much for your visit! It is nice to know you liked it!

Children are a true blessing from God, aren`t they?

Warm regards and blessings to you, my dear friend!

Al

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Shil1978 Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Friend, that was beautiful!! Such a sweet daughter you are blessed with, and she's equally blessed to have a father like you.

Give my regards to the sweet princess and yes, I do hope you both have eternal moments of joy being with each other and sharing the most wonderful of relationships around, the father-daughter one!!

Love and warm wishes to you both!!!

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wavegirl22 Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Al - I love your energy. Always remember that the winds and the waves are always on the side of the ablest navigators and you my friend are navigating your day together at the beach in more ways than one.

Much &hearts to you,

Shari

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prettydarkhorse Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

touching and lovely, sweetest indeed, One day I hope you can go to a beach with her, BTW your daughter is lovely and charming, Maita

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Dearest Shil...

Thank you, my sweet friend! Yes, she is a blessing! And think that her big brother, who doesn`t know her because he lives in Japan is 21 years older than her...Geez! I am done with production, LOL! Now I am gonna enjoy them, regardless of how far apart they are!

Million Blessings to you and your child as well,

Your friend,

Al

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Dearest Shari...

Thank you, my wave friend! She is a very gracious girl and quite funny too! I must say that Suè Daniella and Claudio-Ryusuke are great part of my joy and the reason I have changed my views on life! Thank God for that!

warm waves and blessings, dear Shari

Your friend,

Al

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

My sweet kaibigan...

How nice of you to be here! I do appreciate that very much! Yes, I hope so too! The perfect time is coming and I`m waiting for it!

Salamat, my sweet Maita!

warm regards and blessings,

your kaibigan,

Al

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Moulik Mistry 2 years ago

Great tribute to your son, lovely emotive words make it very much worth reading...

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Petra Vlah Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

May your instant of joy last for ever protected by love and happiness. Your Daniella is precious and her almond eyes are intelligent, sweet and loving. What a gift to have such wonderful children! You are a blessed father

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you ever so much, Moulik, that`s very nice of you to say! I love my daughter very much, and my son as well!

Warm regards and blessings,

Al

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Mia carissima amica...

Grazie mille! It is so nice to see you around. I cherish your wishes and I know they`ll become true! Thank you for leaving your sweet feelings on this hub.

warm regards and benedizione,

Al

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Coolmon2009 Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Beautiful Poem

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you, my dear friend!

Thank you for stopping by and being around!

Warm regards and blessings,

Al

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dohn121 Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

What a beautiful poem for a beautiful little girl! Thanks so much, Al. I loved the part about the wet sand. I hope she enjoys this.

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you, my brother! Now you understand why I have identified with Halley. Of course, Suè isn`t dead(Thank God)and she is just 7. But the father feeling is there and I felt sorry for Cody. I thank God for my children every morning, there isn`t a better gift.

warm regards and blessings,

Al

Maria Elena 2 years ago

Beautilful...congratulations, poet. Kisses

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanks a lot, dear!

I appreciate a whole lot you stopped by and commented!

From my heart, thank you!

warm regards and blessings,

Al

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Green Lotus Level 6 Commenter 2 years ago

What a beautiful gift to your sweet beautiful daughter. You are a lucky guy.

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Teresa Laurente 2 years ago

How great it is to have parents who love their children as much as you do. You belong to a crowd worthy of praises. Children are blessed with wonderful memories of parents like you. Your poem illustrates the playful things we do to our children when they are younger. Keep up the great works of parenthood. Enjoy it while you can, for they will never wait for time, they grow so fast, you cannot even grasp the moment. Thank you for sharing this beautiful thought and poem. Lovely! More power. Keep on.

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Green Lotus...

Thank you for your presence here! It is sweet to be appreciated. I am very happy you liked it!

warmest regards and blessings,

Al

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

Maria Teresa...

Thank you for your comments and warm words! It is wonderful to have positive people around(like yourself). I am very happy you liked it!

warmest regards and blessings,

Al

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Tammy Lochmann Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

Beautiful poem my friend your daughter is beautiful and lucky to have such a loving and faithful father.

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

My dearest Tam...

Thank you very much for stopping a while,reading and commenting! I am glad you liked it! Yes! That little one is truly an inspiration!

warmest regards and blessings,

Al

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betherann 2 years ago

Sue is absolutely beautiful, as is your poem.

I must admit, I hardly ever read the creative works here on HubPages and on similar sites. It's difficult to find good quality work when publication is virtually unrestricted. However, this poem was a pleasant surprise -- it's moving and vivid, and I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for opening me up to the creative writing section of HubPages! :)

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Mystique1957 Hub Author 2 years ago

betherann...

Thank you for stopping by, my friend! I am so glad you liked the poem. My baby is a sweetheart! I couldn´t have gotten a better gift than her. Look forward to reading more of your hubs!

warmest regards and infinite blessings,

Al

JJ (pachuca213) 19 months ago

What a beautiful poem. And what beautiful photos. You can see the love you have for your kids radiate from within the photograph. Unconditional love is such a wonderful blessing isn't it? being able to give it freely and receive it in return. The best of blessings from our Heavenly Father. HUGS!

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Eiddwen 13 months ago

Beautiful words for a beautiful little girl.

Thank you for proudly sharing this one with us.

Take care

Eiddwen.

Jose0310 3 weeks ago

Thank you for posting this poemI am very happy for you and your daughter. God bless you and your family.

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