Love Poetry
64Chiaroscuro
The moon silently cooed the sun,
she was sneaking behind a cloud
while he was shining so bright and proud,
she tiptoed kissing him in a run
He flickered shyly after the touch,
she tried to hide, but not too much
the golden light became argentine,
silvery-gold turned the night within
Her queendom covering all the space,
carpeted velvet of flashing stars,
chariots of fire leaving a trace,
untrodden paths of the avatars
So she´ll be stomping the fog away
playing the muse for those who write
mystery glitter, performing rite
love´s in the air meaning to stay
Sol and Selene shall meet again,
She, being naughty, him with his pride
a true pure feeling that can sustain,
the different moments where they abide
Copyright ©Mystique®2010
Copyright ©Alberto J. Alvarez G. ® 2010
How do you feel about love stories with the sun and the moon?
See results without votingIf I had you near
If I had you near
if I had you at hand
you would never land
an unhappy tear
If I had you near
to light up my days
nor sorrow or fear
would show on my face
If I had you near
I´d enjoy your voice
caressing my ear
with the sweetest poise
If your willful shine
enshrouded my quill
my poetic line
would write how I feel
If I had your heart
to cuddle, to kiss
I would never part
you would be my bliss
If I could just tell
how to weave a spell
I would freeze up time
and you would be mine
If I had a dove
with angel-like wings
I would send you rings
sprinkled with love
If I had you near
If I had you close…
Copyright ©Mystique®2010
Copyright ©Alberto J. Alvarez G. ® 2010
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Wow. Both poems had such power and such love. A natural poet you are and it seems as if the feelings you have flow so easily onto the page. Bravo!
Aaaah! So beautiful! I wish those are mine!
Powerful, yet enchanting, Al. Thank you for sharing!
Excellent poems. I loved them both. Very good hub.
hi sunshine, why thank you. They are wonderful =)
Geez, Al. You're such a smoothie :D Leave some of these ladies for me, huh? Excellent work my friend. You're work is sensual, sincere, and strikes a chord. Keep up the great work ;)
Warmest Regards,
Dohn
Well Mystique1957 - Poetic and artistic - what the world needs more of. I'm inspired. I've never been happier than when I'm viewing art or reading poetry - or writing it.
Thanks for a creative evening! (Love the photo of the hearts and you and the lovely lady)
Beautiful writings, loved, simply loved...
More beautiful poetry. You have a gift!
Excellent poetry.. Those pics by you receive great applauses from a crowd of audience inside me. I am sure that you will win names and fames when you display them in an art exhibition. Great Job Sir.
sure they will meet again-love for you! and they are partners hehe-- beautiful poem, and Salamat always, Maita
you know these poems still make me smile, and I do so enjoy them. of course I was happy to get to read Before they were on hubpages so there you go.
Another good hub; I like both poems; thank you :)
Two very beautiful poems, the second was my favorite. Thanks so much for sharing. A real romanticist when it comes to poetry.
Great Job, Rated up!
Sage
What lovely peoms - great expression going on here. Thank you for letting me into your head x
Beautiful Poem. Its nice to see the Poetic side of you.
Loved it. :)
youre welcome mystique and have a great day my kaibigan, take care! Maita
This is totally beautiful poem. I have to say to you....you are my Man. Please allow me to rate Up this hub. Gracias.
Prasetio
All of these poems, I liked. Beautiful thoughts you shared in here. I am impressed. You, filipino?
Very Beautiful Mystique. God does shine love in you friend. Your words have blessed me on this Good Friday. I am grateful I landed on your hubs. It was not a mistake. Amen. Many Blessings at Easter.
You had me at "Chiaroscuro!" These poems are really amazing, Mystique. I'm honored to be a new 'follower.'
I sooo love a great love story, Al! And this is just seeping with such a vibrant penetrating glow of love.. Of course, you know I sooo love the sun and moon symbolism of lovers.. perfect balance.. :) Kudos
Namaste'
You have a way with words, from the soul, the only kind I stop to read. I find surprise a real feeling when I write from the soul and it's as surprising to me as if my fingers read my mind before I was told. Great read here.
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VioletSun Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago
Both poems are beautiful, but the second one is my favorite. Freezing time to keep one's love gives me a beautiful visual. If you haven't met Poetlorraine, she is another poet in Hubpages and I recommend her work as writes about everything.
Thumbs up!